The Rocker Crime

Thursday: 01:45
I went to the kitchen and ate a nutritive banana, but something  was wrong. I went to my room and took my electric guitar  and tried to think. OK, something was wrong, someone stole one string of my guitar. D:
How is it Posible!!!!??
I ran to the store, but the store was closed >.<
OK, is stupid that the store was open at  01:47. But i was desesperated.
I went back to my home, and my guitar was dying.
I looked to my guitar and shouted.... WHY???!!!!
Thursday: 02:30
I thought that i needed a profesional. (I am radical)
I called to Victor, I spoke to him of the crime, and he said me that he will found the criminal.
Thursday : 05:40
The time was passing and the criminal was free.
NO notice from victor.
The phone began to sound.
I take the phone ( suspense music):
-Hello?
-Hi
-Who are you?
-I am Victor
-Oh hello victor
-Hello eric, i have news about the criminal, the criminal is called E.....
The phone was broken, in that moment I ran to the victor house.Nothing
I  saw Victor in the floor. He was died.
First my guitar, after Victor, the criminal was very dangerous.
Thursday: 09:30
I called to the police but they did´t believe me.
Thursday: 10:00
I  went to my home, but, someone was follow me.
He was the criminal, but, OH no......!!!!!!
The criminal was Eric!!!
All the time I was the criminal, I couldn´t belive it.
I went to the police, and i took a nuclear bomb and 3, 2, 1....
Hello Jesus.

Fragment of the novel : my grandma sold mercury 5 the revenge.

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